It was awesome.
Mountain Spreings Lake Resort, PA - cabin no. 24, already reserved for next year! |
My mom and I stayed in a lovely Cabin, with a dock. Hiked
about a forest on well maintained trails to view lots of waterfalls. Took a
guided horseback ride on a wooded trail. And generally relaxed and bounced
writing ideas off each other.
It’s funny how different we are. She’s writing children’s
books, and collecting family stories. I’m working on a fantasy with elements of
steam punk. Yet we helped each other out quite a bit. Like contemplating over
what would happen if my crystal powered undead managed to infect a fish. The
thought of flopping fish that desired human flesh and needed to get to the
capitol city incited a plethora of giggles. On a more serious note, we
discussed a way to tie in all her family stories, via one over arching thread,
and just how that thread would lead to the breaking of the curse.
Importantly for me, I figured out just how I want Unearthing
Magic to begin. Thanks to the cabin wall and sticky notes, I whittled down my
opening scenes and played with character motivations and conflicts.
Goes to show that even passive people can have conflict, even when they’d rather avoid it – and the avoidance of conflict can also make that conflict bigger.
I’m quite happy with how this revision is turning out. So
far I’ve got the first three Chapters plotted out, each with four viewpoints.
as you can see in the diagram below. I didn’t want to wait too long introducing
each character, but Travis and Angela got the whole first Chapter to
themselves. After all the ball starts rolling downhill with Travis’s last
assassination attempt, that leads to his kidnapping and it’s not until after
that kidnapping that Herbert and Lori enter the picture.
Plotting on the Cabin Wall |
Lori was my hardest character. She’s passive-aggressive and prefers to she avoids conflict.
Case in Point: After Ara died, Lori knew she ought to go
home to her birth mother, but she doesn’t want to. So rather than asking her
parents if she can stay, or asking Mart to do so for her, she just stays and
says nothing. – But then I realized,
this is her conflict. – Because she’s
passive, if her birth parents call her to move back home, she’ll do so to try
and avoid her mother’s volcanic temper, even though she wants to stay with
Mart. And until Lori finds herself pulled into the troubles of the larger
world, she’s always going to be fearful that she’ll be called back across the
road to stay.
Goes to show that even passive people can have conflict, even when they’d rather avoid it – and the avoidance of conflict can also make that conflict bigger.
Final outline of Chapters 1-3 |
Yes, I’m quite happy with where my first three chapters are
going. And when I have them set, I’ll work on the next bunch – however many
that may be.
Bushkill Falls - if your ever in PA near Wilks-Barre Scraton - check it out - a very well maintained private park with fourteen (yes 14) waterfalls, and a look out, we didn't make it too because we'd already walked around for thre hours. :} |
:} Cathryn Leigh